Throughout critique, the commentary I received was overall helpful and would lead me in the right direction for a further iteration of the film. If I were to create a further iteration of this film, I would make the following changes:
- I would make sure that the point of view of the viewer is first person. In some shots, the camera is angled slightly upward and makes it seem as if the video is being taken from above versus straight ahead.
- I would overlay audio better and make sure that the audio is logical and consistent in terms of where it is placed.
- I would try to crop scenes better than I did in this iteration of the film. There were instances where the screen had to be zoomed in to avoid capturing a foot that sneaked into the frame and I had to crop it in a way that cropped every angle versus the bottom panel. To avoid this, I would try to better learn the software to avoid inconsistency in my frames.
- I may be more considerate of the viewer and omit sounds if they are not necessary. The morning sickness scene sounds disgusting and makes the persons nausea seem real.
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